I Only have a couple of problems with this build: 1st is that there is not much depth in your walls as well very little detail to the whole build....
Here is another build i just started today http://imgur.com/7YvsfNh Hope you like it.
The walls are very flat and don't have much depth to them. Also the contrast of the block is not the best maybe you may want to work on your block...
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