Anything I could do better?

So I make videos like these and I just need some suggestions I always add on but no one ever tells me anything they want so throw down some suggestions

 

I like it. It'd be great for some MC youtuber's to fill in awkward pauses when they're just playing a mini game or fast forwarding thru a build.

I'm not a music expert but the music sounds great to me!

good job!

 

Oh I didn't make it I made the thing that moves to the music

 

oh well I'm dumb, See not a music expert

Like my new profile pictures. That's my sister in the pic so don't get any ideas OK

 

xD funny